as the crowd erupted in triumph he knew he got it from seeing everything in slow motion seeing his mouth guard fly threw the air with the mixture of sweat and spit flying with it the skin rippiling looking like it is about to peel off the canvas is ready for a thud off a 170 pound man about to hit it full force of his dead weight face first
This post interested me because it uses great words that make it so the reader is right beside the fighters watching the impact of the punch. The line "skin rippling looking like it is about to peel off" is very well worded and is well descriptive to the audience. I think that this post is well executed for the writer to connect with the audience.
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